Today I made a few edits to the previous chapters and completed chapter 2. I wanted to add a bit more details to the beginning so that the reader can better understand what is going on. Along with this, I have changed the Key Notes part. Originally, there would be a * symbol next to something that had more information, and I would put that at the bottom of the page. However, Doing this took a lot of space and most of the time it wouldn't fit at the bottom of the page. Since I am using Google Docs to write my story, I decided to use a different option; comments. This feature allows me to add keynotes without having them mess up the layout of the pages. Now, all you have to do is click the highlighted word, and a message containing the key note will pop up. I'm not sure if this will work when I publish it, but if it doesn't, I will go back to the original idea. Until then, this is how I will do key notes.
This chapter is not as long as the previous chapters due to it setting up the story's main antagonist along with there being no fight scene. In this chapter, Verndari (the Grand Protector), Agent N and Agent X discuss what will happen now that the Ragnarok (the Great Destroyer) is gone. Agent N doesn't believe that Ragnarok is dead, while Agent X and Verndari believe he is. Verndari then tasks Agent X and Agent N with retrieving the Dark Stone that is being sent back to Homeworld to figure out what to do with it. As they leave, Agent N feels weird, along with his Core turning dark like in the chapter before. He then tells a worried Agent X that he's probably just bruised from fighting Ragnarok, and has Agent X go on as he goes to his quarters. We then find out that ever since the fight with Ragnarok, Agent N has been fighting the Darkness that is trying to corrupt him. but he doesn't think that he can keep fighting. We then see Agent N become corrupted by the Darkness as his Core and white armor turn dark. Now corrupted, Agent N wants to destroy the Protectors and the Light, and he knows how to do it. This is where the chapter ends.
Due to the chapter being short, there wasn't much new information we were given besides Agent N turning evil. We aren't given much information about the other Protectors, but the main idea of this is that Agent N and Agent X are the two best Protectors in the Corps. Before I end this update, here are a few notes about the story:
*Up to this point, Universe X no longer exists. The reason for this is currently unknown.
*Protector Sentries were created by the Watchers to be their main fighting force and security force before the Protectors. The Sentries were used in the Grand Multiverse war and were often led by Protectors who served as generals. Besides fighting, Sentries are also used for security. They are often in charge of guarding the Grand Protector, important rooms, and the Protector Command Centers. These Sentries carry a laser rifle and are extremely intelligent.
*Similar to the Protectors, Protector Sentries are powered by Light Cores, however they aren't as powerful as the Protector's Light Cores.
*The Grand Protector uses Observatory to watch over current events in the Multiverse and informs Protectors of important tasks
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